“Little
Green” Analysis
Amelia Maloney
2/7/12
Poetry of Song G
Through the sorrowful telling of giving her child up for
adoption in “Little Green”, Joni Mitchell utilizes inclusive point of view,
detailed characterization, soft imagery, and in order to convey the message
that life will be happy, but “sometimes there’ll be sorrow.”
A tool that the artist uses is point of
view. There are views of the mother, the
father, and the child, which are all very important. The point of view from the mother, “You’re
sad and you’re sorry, but you’re not ashamed” describes how she is upset about
having to give her child away, but she knows that she is doing the right thing,
saving her child from suffering. The
whole song is about the child being born and how the mother wants a better life
for her child. The mother wants her
child to be whatever she wants to be “Little Green, be a gypsy dancer.” The point of view from the father is
important as well because he isn’t a part of the child’s life after she is born
“He went to California/Hearing that everything’s warmer there.” This shows that the father is afraid of being
a part of her life or that he has no interest in having anything to do with
her. Point of view helps tell the story
of the song and makes the story more interesting and vivid.
Another
device that the singer uses in order to show the universal idea of the song is
characterization. The song is
characterizing the mother, father, and the child, all of them being detailed
and helping tell the story behind the song.
The mother is characterized as being afraid about having her child being
giving up for adoption, but she is okay with that decision, “You’re sad and
you’re sorry, but you’re not ashamed.” The
father of the child is shown as being uninterested in his child’s life and he
proves this by leaving, “He went to California, / Hearing everything’s warmer
there.” The child’s characterization is
the most important part of the song because she helps the story come
together. The mother wanted her to be
whatever she wanted to be “Little Green, be a gypsy dancer.” Characterization is the most useful tool that
the singer uses because it helps show what the subjects of the song are like
and also highlights their parts of the story.
The
singer paints a picture of the story by using imagery. The father of the child leaves after she is
born because he is uninterested “He went to California” paints a picture for
the listener of a man going off from his family because he is scared and
confused. The imagery used in the song
can be characterized as bittersweet because she uses both happy imagery, “There’ll
be icicles and birthday clothes.” There is
also seasonal imagery being used in order to make the song softer and
interesting, “Like the color when the spring is born.” The singer uses imagery in order to display
what is going on in the story and to make the listener more interested. Imagery is the most important part of the
song because it basically tells the story of the lives of the mother, father,
and child.
This
was an interesting and detailed song because of the devices that the singer
uses. All of them tell the story and
helps the reader understand what the mother went through. The devices also help convey the universal
idea that life will be happy, but that there will also be times of sorrow and
sadness.
You might want to fix the placement of "and" in your thesis, and the first body paragraph is good, but seems to be reffering to characterization rather than POV. Plus, it seems almost the same, in content as the second paragraph. I like your universal idea!
ReplyDeleteYour qoute integration is done very smoothly, however, try to use a variety of different quotes. Also, in your thesis I noticed a slight grammatical error, "soft imagery, and in order to." I think the "and" is supposed to come before "soft imagery" Besides that it was written very well.
ReplyDelete- Emily B.
Amelia, I think the ideas you put into this piece were good; however, I felt as though I read the same paragraph twice in the beginning, quotes and all. Also, when you want to insert a quote into a sentence, even if the quote has a capital letter, you want to use a lower case letter. Furthermore, I felt as though quotes weren't very well intergrated; however, the quotes that were chosen were good, and they conveyed the message you were trying to get across.
ReplyDelete*unrealated note* On your link list, you added an e to my name; I spell it Gabbi, not Gabbie. :3
ReplyDeleteGabbie- whoops :)
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